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How to Write a Letter of Asking for Help假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信:1.本人简历2.求助内容3.约定时间4.你的联系方式(Email:lihua@1236.com;Phone:12345678)注意:1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.结束语已为你写好。1.本人简历Which one is correct?A.I am a studentwho studyin a English school.B.I am a studentwho am studyingin a English school.C.I am a studentwho is studyingin a English school.√I am a studentwho is studyingin a English school.√I am a studentstudyingin a English school.现在分词做后置定语××√那么,什么时候可以用who句型呢?第一种情况:I am a student who is Li Hua.评析:信息短,最好不要用,可以用and连接改进:I am Li Hua,and I am a student.I am a student who is studying in a school.评析:信息较长,可以用定语从句2.求助内容-为什么需要帮助物质 It's difficult for me to buy so many English books.The charge issodearthatI can't afford it.so,so....that,so that的区别?He is cute(可爱的)so we all like him.He is so cute that we all like him.He pretends to be cute so that we all like him.book feesHe is cute(可爱的)sowe all like him.他很可爱所以我们都喜欢他。He issocutethatwe all like him.他如此可爱以致于我们都喜欢他。He pretends to be cuteso thatwe all like him.为了让我们都喜欢他,他假装很可爱。so:所以,后加结果so…that:如此…以致于,后加结果so that:为了,以便,后加原因意思等同于in order to doso,so....that,so that的区别?运用-书籍如此有趣所以我爱读书。Books are interesting so I like reading.书籍如此有趣以致于我爱上了读书。Books are so interesting that I like reading.为了让我爱上读书,妈妈买了很多有趣的书。In order tomake me fall in love with reading, my mother bought many interesting books.My mother bought many interesting booksso thatI can fall in lovewith reading.学习 I am not good at English listening.I can not understand what teachers say in class.表示“不擅长”的词组be short inbe not good atbe weak in精神 I feel lonely,I can't get along well with classmates.What's wrong with this sentence?I feel lonely,I can't get along well with classmates.大家好我是一个独立的句子。大家好我也是一个独立的句子。两个句子一般有这两种关系-1.并列关系I feel lonely,I can't get along well with classmates.I feel lonely,andI can't get along well with classmates.I feel lonely,butI can't get along well with classmates.我们是平等的!第一个关系-2.主从关系I feel lonely,I can't get along well with classmates.I feel lonely,forI can't get along well with classmates.I feel lonely,becauseI can't get along well with classmates.我是老大3.约定时间经济适用型:I need the Learning Center to help me.霸总式:Iwill be freethat day.礼貌约定式:If you are free this Sunday,could you please spare some time and have a talk with me?别出心裁-被邀请做一次学习分享讲座I 'm scheduled to make an English speech.I would appreciate it ifyou could help me to improve my speech skills.佛系约定系:Let's meetat weekends.无厘头约定式:I have trouble in English learning,solet's make it at 8 o'clock.改进版:I have trouble in English learning,so would you please give me some suggestions to help me get rid of this dilemma(困境)?Is it convenient of you to make it at 8 o'clock this Sunday morning?4.你的联系方式与某人联系contact sb/contact with sb.get in touch with sb.My number:12345678×改法一:Here is my number:12345678.改法二:My number is12345678.总结1.so:所以,后加结果so…that:如此…以致于,后加结果so that:为了,以便,后加原因意思等同于in order to do2.句子之间的关系3.客气委婉求助的问句A.Would you pleIf you are free this Sunday,could you please spare some time and have a talk with me?B.Would you please give me some suggestions to help me get rid of this dilemma(困境)?C.Is it convenient of sb. to do sth.Characteristics1.通常使用的时态:_______________;2.阐述要清晰,用词要恰当,注意语气委婉、真诚;情态动词多使用__________3.注意使用过渡性词汇,如:first,besides, also, what’s more, atthe same time, meanwhile, inaddition, unfortunately, luckily,thus, however, so that等等。一般现在时would/ couldUseful expressions for writing the letter:A.点明目的B.描述困难C.恳求帮助D.表示感谢E.期盼回复PresentationA.点明目的我写信是为了向你寻求帮助。1. _________________________________2. _______________________________________________________________More expressions:3. I am sorry to bother you, but I really need your help (with…)4. I’m writing to ask whether you can help me.I am writing this letter to ask you to do meI’m writing to you to get/ ask for some help.a favor/give me a hand.B.描述困难我在英语学习方面遇到了一些困难。1. ________________________________________________________________2. ________________________________More expressions:3. I am now confronted/faced with the difficulty with…/ following difficulties..4. The reason why I write this letter is thatI have trouble when I do sth.I find it difficult for me to do sth.I have some difficulty/ trouble in doing…(because…)C.寻求帮助/建议你可以帮助我吗?1. _________________________________2. _______________________________________________________________More expressions:3. Faced with/Facing so much difficulty, I have to turn to you for some help.4. It would be very helpful if you could do me a favor.5. I really don’t know what to do and expect you to give me your advice/ suggestions.6. I have no idea what I should do and long for your advice.I wonder if you can help me with theCould you please give me a hand?difficulty.D.表示感谢如果你能帮助我/给予我建议,我将不胜感激。1. I would be grateful ___________________________________________________2. I would _________ it ________________________________________________More expressions:3. I would like to express my thanks/ gratitude in advance (for your kindness).4. Thank you for…if you could give me somesuggestions (on how to solve the problem).appreciateif you could offerme help.E.期盼回复希望尽快收到你的来信。1. ________________________________________________________________2. ________________________________More expressions:3. I sincerely hope to get your timely reply.4. Your kind early reply will be highly appreciated.Expecting your writing back soon.Looking forward to/ Hoping for your earlyreply (and I’ll be grateful for your help).PracticeExample 1:(2011山东卷) 假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件:a.询问Tom的生活和学习情况;b.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙;c.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意:a.词数:100左右;b.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯Step 1:构思审题时态人称提纲(提取信息)Para 1Para 2Para 3一般现在时第一、第二人称Tom上个月来到北京学习,询问Tom的生活和学习情况。我将去参加英语演讲比赛,在……等方面遇到了困难。打算赛后去看Tom求助,感谢Step 2:提笔Dear Tom,It has been a month since you studied in Beijing. ① (问候) ____________________________________________?I am going to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July this summer.However, ②(搜集资料困难)__________________________________________ when I collect useful materials.Meanwhile,③(语言运用困难)_________________________ in using English properly. ④ __________, I may be too nervous to speak in face of thousands of audience. ⑤(求助并感谢)__________________________________________________________________________________.Hopefully, the great effort I am making will pay off.I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.Yours,Li HuaStep 3:注意过渡,衔接,检查文章(如时态,主谓一致等)How is everything going with youI am now confronted with difficultyI still have some troubleBesidesI would appreciate itif you could give me a hand and thank you for your help(2017汕头一模)假如你是李华,最近在学习美国风俗,但国内有关这方面的地道书籍较少。你想麻烦你的美国笔友Mike帮你买一些这方面的书。现在请根据以下信息给Mike写一封信。1.说明买书的理由;2.对书的要求(如数量,寄送时间等);3.会转账给他。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;生词:转账transfer moneyExample 2:Step 1:构思审题时态人称提纲(提取信息)Para 1Para 2Para 3一般现在时第一、第二人称问候Mike,请他帮忙买书说明买书的理由(书籍少);书的数量,寄送时间;会转账感谢,期待回复Dear Mike,①(问候)_____________________? ②(写信目的)_______________________________________________________.Recently, ③(我在学习美国风俗)______________________________________. ④(国内有关这方面的书较少)______________________________________________ ⑤(请求帮助)___________________________________________________.Step 2:提笔How is everything goingI am writing to ask if you can help me buy someinterest in American customs.However, in China there are few books relatedThus, it would be verybooksin America.I have greatto this topic.helpful if you could buy some books.⑥(书的数量)_______________________________________________________________________. ⑦(寄送时间)___________________________________________________. ⑧(我转账)_________ _________________________________________.____________________.⑨(表示感谢)__________________________ ________________. ⑩(期待回复)_____________ _________________.Yours,Li HuaAbout three to five books are enoughand I hope that they are easy for me to understandI would appreciate it if you could sendthem to me before Aprilplease tell me how much you pay for them and I willBy the way,transfer money to youI would like to express my thanksto your early replyfor your kindnessLooking forwardStep 3:注意过渡,衔接,检查文章(如时态,主谓一致等)假定你是李华,你正在为高考紧张复习,但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:1.作业多,没有时间运动。2.压力大,难以入睡。3.希望得到Kate的帮助。注意:1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。Homework:Dear Kate,I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li HuaDear Kate,I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student.Recently, I have been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam,but unfortunatelyIfind it quite hard to concentrate on my study.SoI am writing to ask you for help.I am encountering some problems which trouble me a lot .First,I have to spendsomuch time on my homeworkthatI hardly have time to take sports.Moreover,the high expectations from the teachers and my parents make me extremely stressed because I don’t want to let them down.1.What troubles me mostisthat it is difficult for me to fall asleep every night.2.Faced withthe above problems,I am anxious to get your help.Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems?3. Looking forward to your early reply.Sincerely yours,Li Hua问候语How is everything (going)?一切都好吗?I hope everything is all right.我希望(你)一切都好。How are you getting along these days? I miss you very much.你近来过得如何?我十分想念你。高考英语满分作文:求助信  假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件:   1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况;  2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙;  3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。   注意:  1.词数:120—150;  2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。  Dear Tom,   How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing. Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are. Let me tell you a piece of good news: I’m going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation. So I’m busy preparing for it. But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English words to express my thoughts. Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation(语调). Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions. In addition, I’m going to visit you after the contest.  I’m sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing! I can hardly wait to see you! I am looking forward to your early reply.  Yours,  Li Hua

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